“Can't run much longer” I mumbled to myself. “C'mon legs push it to the limits.”As the straight line of grass appears in front of me I sprint Hard core non stop. Trees were zooming past as fast as lighting the grass disappearing. There just ahead of me was Cooper Fale also sprinting to the finish, I felt like a cheetah desperate for food. I felt like a whole different person just sprinting non stop. I dive at the finish with my hands stuck behind my back, I walk into the crowd falling to my knees then straight to the ground breathing heavily over and over again. “I had come 4th” as i tell my friends. As they all came over to me shouting and saying good job Riley. I mumble to myself you are going to the NEW PLYMOUTH CHAMPS, what is going to happen next.Thursday 10 September 2015
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“Can't run much longer” I mumbled to myself. “C'mon legs push it to the limits.”As the straight line of grass appears in front of me I sprint Hard core non stop. Trees were zooming past as fast as lighting the grass disappearing. There just ahead of me was Cooper Fale also sprinting to the finish, I felt like a cheetah desperate for food. I felt like a whole different person just sprinting non stop. I dive at the finish with my hands stuck behind my back, I walk into the crowd falling to my knees then straight to the ground breathing heavily over and over again. “I had come 4th” as i tell my friends. As they all came over to me shouting and saying good job Riley. I mumble to myself you are going to the NEW PLYMOUTH CHAMPS, what is going to happen next.
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ReplyDeleteHi Riley,
That must have been really painful at first but probably rewarding at the end. Personally I could never do that. My legs would die after like 30 seconds. I really liked reading this post it was very well written! If you want to check out my blog here it is: http://shirleys6th.edublogs.org/author/adam1516/
-Adam