Wednesday 29 April 2015

BANG BANG its 9.00 and war has begun against Germany. Lots of young nervous men are sloping down in our crumbling trenchers waiting for orders. I lay in the trench listening to the sound of bullets shattering past my head. I have no idea what is going to happen next WILL I DIE OR WILL I LIVE. These words are racing through my head like the speed of a machine gun firing. Thats when i hear this GET YOUR GUNS READY shouted general haddock. My mate lies next to me getting his grip on his gun. 3  2  1  GO as i watch all the young nervous men running out of the trench trying to dodge the firing bullets. I jump out the trench and there they were the german soldiers all lined up and firing rapidly. BANG BANG BANG AAAAARRRRRRHHHHHH i hear the sound of men crying, screaming and praying what do i do? Do i shoot or could that make it worse. I say to myself well its time to find out BANG i fire thinking it would strike someone. Then my mate louise whispers in my ear very quietly this is the end of us. RATA TAT TAT the german bully goes of that is what we called the german machine gun because it has killed a lot of young men. RATA TAT TAT AAAAAARRRRRRRHHHHHHH im hit shouts louise as i stare into his eyes straight away i knew that i will have to get revenge on these germans.



1 comment:

  1. 'Will I die or will I live? These words are racing through my head like the speed of a machine gun firing.'
    Wow Riley. I am impressed with the way you have stepped into the mind and body of that soldier on the battle field, expressing his confused emotions.
    Thanks you for sharing.

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